Nowadays in the world we have the problem
of the climate change. A lot of people think that only the governments can
solve this problem. But that is true or there is something that we as
individuals can do to prevent the climate change? Yes, we can. In my opinion, as
individuals we can prevent the global warming.
Firstly
we know a lot of ways to help the environment: recycling, using the bike
instead of the car, throwing our rubbish in trash cans, or take care of the water
when we use it. So we see that we have these and a lot of different options to save
the environment.
But we can think that if someone of us make
it, it won’t be significant. But if someone do it and after that other person
see the action and he repeats it. It’s like a snowball falling from a mountain.
One person does it, other take the example and starts doing it, and someone
else makes the same. At the beginning was only one, but at the end a lot of
people takes the same way.
In conclusion, I believe that we can do
something as individuals to prevent the climate change, may be it will be
difficult but it’s not impossible.
the structure was fine and the metaphor of the snowball was really good. Perhaps you are not too formal yet, you should work on that. Besides you don't take advantage of all the structures we are learning. they will help you to avoid being so repetitive some times and also to make the whole text more fluent.
ReplyDeletebut all in all is fine to be the first essay!