This was in August 2011. It all started with high levels of humidity in the city which is usually damp. Rain didn't stop for days and ut was also becoming stronger. A lot of streets were beginning to flood because the rubbish had covered all the grids.
One day, I was going to school on my mum's car. [did you go out or not?] We didn't leave our house because there was a lot of water in the street. It had been pouring for two days straight. Nobody could do anything, all the shops were close and the traffic lights didn't work because there was not light in the whole city.
It was a big disaster because a lot of people lost their possessions like houses, cars or clothes!
Sofia Majluf
Sofi
ReplyDeletepay attention to the corrections, you had some problems with tenses and also in some cases I found it difficult to understand the sequences you described.