Wednesday, 10 June 2015

climate change in the society

Nowadays, climate change is becoming more and more increasing. Quickly, the weather is changing all over the world and, as a result, the environment is getting different in many ways. In the way the world see it, North Pole is melting, sea level is rising, temperature is getting higher because of the global warming actions. In my opinion, climate change is a consequence of an unconcerned society.

Society thought the ages had made the idea of that individual acts can damage the nature; for instance, just one person can´t change everything. In my personal point of view, one human (no matter which actions make) cannot change the environment, the weather or even the pollution. Therefore, he needs the action of the society to make a significant change.

On the other hand, the whole community is the one which has to make the decisions that could save (or not) the environment where we live. However, the society doesn’t thinks like that. Slowly, it is damaging itself and making future disasters get closer.

In conclusion, the community has to realize the actual situation that is involving us, because if the society cannot do anything to change our situation, who would? That´s why we need to take care about the world we live. 


M. Belén Sanjuán

1 comment:

  1. Belén, remember that essays do not take titles!
    as for the essay, maybe the main problems are not connected to grammar or vocabulary but to the essay structure itself. You need to state more clearly some points of view as well as bear on mind it is a formal piece of writing (no contractions!)
    I'll take the corrections to class today!

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