Nowadays,
climate change is becoming more and more increasing. Quickly, the weather is
changing all over the world and, as a result, the environment is getting
different in many ways. In the way the world see it, North Pole is melting, sea
level is rising, temperature is getting higher because of the global warming
actions. In my opinion, climate change is a consequence of an unconcerned
society.
Society thought
the ages had made the idea of that individual acts can damage the nature; for
instance, just one person can´t change everything. In my personal point of
view, one human (no matter which actions make) cannot change the environment,
the weather or even the pollution. Therefore, he needs the action of the
society to make a significant change.
On the
other hand, the whole community is the one which has to make the decisions that
could save (or not) the environment where we live. However, the society doesn’t
thinks like that. Slowly, it is damaging itself and making future disasters get
closer.
In conclusion,
the community has to realize the actual situation that is involving us, because
if the society cannot do anything to change our situation, who would? That´s
why we need to take care about the world we live.
M. Belén
Sanjuán
Belén, remember that essays do not take titles!
ReplyDeleteas for the essay, maybe the main problems are not connected to grammar or vocabulary but to the essay structure itself. You need to state more clearly some points of view as well as bear on mind it is a formal piece of writing (no contractions!)
I'll take the corrections to class today!